Subject: RFC 4404 Erratum

From: Alfred Hönes <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 3 Mar 2006 21:00:22 +0100 (MEZ)

Hello,
the recently published RFC 4404 contains an error
that preferrably should be addressed by an Errata Note:

Section "2.1.  FCIP Entity Instances Table" of RFC 4404, on page 3,
says:

   The FCIP Entity table contains information about this entity's
   existing instances of FCIP entities.

It should say:
                                                         vvvvvv
|  The FCIP Entity table contains information about this device's
   existing instances of FCIP entities.

Rationale:
* The present text is almost recursive nonsense.
* Section 2. explains the terminology.
* The DESCRIPTION clause of the fcipEntityInstanceTable OBJECT-TYPE
  definition (on page 9) correctly states:

           "Information about this FCIP device's existing instances of
            FCIP entities."
                                        ^^^^^^

Best Regards,
  Alfred Hönes.

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