Subject: RFC 4529 errata

From: Alfred Hönes <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 6 Jul 2006 22:34:45 +0200 (MESZ)

Hello,
in the recently published RFC 4528 (LDAP Assertion Control)
authored by you, I have noted two word omissions that might be
covered by an RFC Errata Note.

(1)

The 2nd paragraph of Section 1, on page 2, says:

   The control may be attached to any update operation to support
   conditional addition, deletion, modification, and renaming of the
   target object.  The asserted condition is evaluated as an integral
   part the operation.

It should say:

   The control may be attached to any update operation to support
   conditional addition, deletion, modification, and renaming of the
   target object.  The asserted condition is evaluated as an integral
|  part of the operation.
       ^^^^

(2)

Within Section 3, the first paragraph on page 3 says:

   When the control is attached to an LDAP request, the processing of
   the request is conditional on the evaluation of the Filter as applied
   against the target of the operation.  If the Filter evaluates to
   TRUE, then the request is processed normally.  If the Filter
   evaluates to FALSE or Undefined, then assertionFailed (122)
   resultCode is returned, and no further processing is performed.

It should say:

   When the control is attached to an LDAP request, the processing of
   the request is conditional on the evaluation of the Filter as applied
   against the target of the operation.  If the Filter evaluates to
   TRUE, then the request is processed normally.  If the Filter
|  evaluates to FALSE or Undefined, then the assertionFailed (122)
   resultCode is returned, and no further processing is performed.

Best regards,
  Alfred Hönes.

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